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Some people think that the only way to be successful in business is to have a unique product. Discuss if you agree or disagree.

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With the rapid growth of
business
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 and trade across the globe, there has been high-level competition in the
market
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 for the
last
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 few decades. Considering the boom in industrialization and trade, I advocate that there is a need for having a distinctive product or service for the population, to be ahead in
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 race. With the transformation of the
world
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 into a global village, there is an opportunity for businesses to operate all over the
world
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 without constructing brick-and-mortar offices or shops. Due to
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, there is an abundance of goods and products in the
market
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 and people have a wider choice.
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, the manufacturers are in large numbers now to supply the products anywhere in the
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,
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 making it difficult for anyone to succeed in the
business
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.
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, to stand at the top in the
market
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, the product must be unique and far superior to those of competitors to entice the population.
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, the mobile companies that dominate the field have distinctive features like memory size, battery back-up duration, processor speed, etc.
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, to the above-mentioned point, the taste and choices of people are changing with time, and to be in a row of successful
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 units, there is a need of being dynamics in today’s fast-paced
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.
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, people are always hunting for something new and full of distinctive features so that they can be a symbol of class in society.
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, the fashion trend changes quite fast and the industry is flooded with manufacturers but there are few top brands that dominate the
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 fashion industry just because they keep the
market
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 busy with the new stylish clothes and accessories. In conclusion, for achieving milestones in the
business
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world
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 today, it is compulsory to have a unique item or out of box ideas to provide outstanding service to the clients. I strongly believe that the innovation and advancement that emphasizes the version of any product can guarantee success in the
market
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 nowadays.
Submitted by Musaib ul hassan on

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