Government plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the authority. - Explain where you came to know about the news. - Describe the negative effects of airport construction - Ask to consider alternate site for airport construction No less than 150 words

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter with regard to the new
airport
construction coming up in our locality at Mulund west. I got to know about
this
news through "The Daily Times" newspaper
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the upcoming constructions page.
Initially
, I was glad
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about the article because the government has planned to fund
this
project with international standards design. The column
also
described that the project would be executed by four leading architects and builders. Later, I was surprised after learning about the location of
this
project. Building an international
airport
in Mulund locality might have some troublesome effects
such
as noise pollution and increased traffic. Since
this
is a residential area, many people may develop certain health issues with the increased noise levels.
Furthermore
, an
airport
in
such
an area would hamper the air quality in the atmosphere as more
number of
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vehicles will travel to and fro from the
airport
thereby
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the residents. If I might suggest, Panvel is one of the best suitable
option
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for an
airport
, as
this
area is in its developmental phase. Many
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of hotels
as well as resorts
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are coming up in the
next
few years which might be convenient for
airport
travellers.
Moreover
, there is ample availability of land which means that the
airport
could be constructed on a large scale basis. I hope that you may consider my suggestion and opt for the best suitable option. Thank you for your time. Yours faithfully, John Meyers
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