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Some people think children should have the freedom to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

#people #children #freedom #mistakes #adults
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 vehicle to get success.
However
, some people recommended, there is no need to restrict
children
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 making
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 the other people
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 that the parents should mentor their
youngones
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young ones
 from doing wrong activities.
This
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both views in the following paragraphs. To commence with,
mistakes
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 carriers by which we are able to learn
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 of things efficiently. Sometimes,
mistakes
 help us to generate innovative ideas.
For example
, Newton was able to find the law of gravitation by mistake when he was watching the apple falling from
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.
Hence
, it is good for
children
 to do
mistakes
 if these
mistakes
 aid them to learn any
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mystery
.
Furthermore
, adults should keep their keen eye on their
children
, if they are doing anything wrong
then
 they should guide them
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 is wrong and what is right.
For instance
, if the
children
 indulge themselves in bad habits
then
 it should be the responsibility of parents to
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children
 refrain themselves to
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 it again. To conclude,
children
 are innocent they
donot
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don't
 know the worst effects of bad things.
Hence
, it should be the conspicuous duty of elders to keep their eye on their youngsters and provide them
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 to do
mistakes
 until
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. If those
mistakes
 are hazardous for them
then
 the guardians need to protect their juveniles from doing those.
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  • freedom to make mistakes
  • critical thinking skills
  • lifelong learning
  • guided learning environment
  • resilience
  • independence
  • overprotective
  • dependency
  • problem-solving skills
  • confidence
  • negative consequences
  • learning process
  • personal growth
  • trial and error
  • balance safety and learning
  • development
  • support and guidance
  • empowerment
  • risk-taking
  • life lessons
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