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A museum near your house is looking for people to do part-time voluntary! Unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work in your letter: • Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum • Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • Give details of when you would be available for work

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The diagram compares the evolution of cutting devices in the stone age. Overall, the main difference between the two cutting appliances is their shapes where the former year, the shaping it was quite unclear compared to the latter year when the cutting machine look sharper and rounded. In detail, In accessory A, the means found 1.4 million years ago had a long appearance from the front and back outlook while in mechanism
B
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 was found 0.8 million years ago had rounded form from the front and backsight.
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, both appliances A and
B
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 have similarities in their structures from a side glimpse, all appliances appeared to be tiniest than from the front and back perspective.
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, all devices A and
B
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 have the same depths in 5cm. It is worth noticing that accessory
B
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 look sharper than accessory A meaning that people in tool
B
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 were more modern than in tools A.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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