Many people today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?

These days, citizens are feeling unsafe either at home or in public. The main causes these are watching too much
violence
on
tv
programs
and people having disbelief in one another human being. The most viable solutions are reinforced laws to control
violence
on
tv
programs
and
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a broadcast
tv
about great stories
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that
humanity
has reached.
First
, it is usually that a family watch action
movies
at home as a habitual routine for Sunday.
However
, watching too many violent
scenes
brings the idea that
this
is
a
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normal
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accepted behaviour and
this
creates the wrong idea that
violence
is
well received
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to protect yourself as well as your family. Another issue is the tendency of
desbelieving
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human beings as good citizens because we have lost contact with each other as normal behaviour.
Moreover
, the are so many apps in which some individuals upload bad experiences with one another human being and
this
image usually is reproduced thousands of times a day.
Besides
this
, some crowds had already had bad experiences in life that made them wrongly believe
this
is our new world.
For instance
, in the United ,States the most popular
movies
for young adults are those that present action, violent or horror
scenes
that are promoted with very eye-catching photos.
Hence
,
this
totally creates for society a violent atmosphere on their behaviour as well as their actittud in life.
Besides
, there are several solutions for these issues which we can start by reinforcing laws to control violent
scenes
in
movies
and
tv
programs
.
This
might be handled by not allowing shooting or fighting
scenes
so often during a program or movie.
As a result
, individuals would not see it as normal to watch violent
scenes
, so the level of fear would be reduced. The
second
solution could be to start promoting
T
.
V
or radio
programs
in which talk about successful stories reached by citizens.
This
will increase the belief in
humanity
as well as reduce the discomfort to be related to one another.
For example
, watching short videos on
T
.
V
about people helping an old citizen cross the
walk
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road brings the feeling to start to believe in
humanity
and kindness again. These short capsules will positively impact in a short time to our society. To conclude, most people do not feel secure either outside or at home because we have been exposed for a long period of time to too much
violence
on
t
.
v
.
this
has brought disbelief in
humanity
.
However
, these can be solved by controlling violent
scenes
on
t
.
v
. and
movies
as well as introducing new
t
.
v
.
programs
in which successful stories can be watched as an inspirational experience.
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