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increment of prices in petro is best solution for traffic and environmental problems

#increment #prices #petro #traffic
Environmental pollution and
traffic
 jams are the main sophisticated problems of all over the world while majority of the society think it's due to the
gases
 emission by
petrol
 combusion in
vehicles
. As it's enunciated by the proportion of the society, prices of
petrol
 should increased to prevent from
this
 situation while others in contradictory view that
this
 apprehension is useless. throughout my essay I will venture and pursue speculative hypothesisi by elaborating my perception. At the same time just as crucially it is conceived as the subject to the strictest most demanding standard of formal assessment with respect to the basic requirement of logical rigour and conceptual precision.
This
 apprehension is unwarrented. In my perspective that
traffic
 and pollution problems mainly arised due to the other alternative ways than the
gases
 emission by the
petrol
 combusion. I provide an interesting characterization and exemplify the essential elements to justify my claim.
Traffic
 jams are mainly arising due to the poor management in urban transport system. According to the researches done by the Harved University, 40% of city roads in UK are facing heavy
traffic
 due to the poor management of the city road constructions. Whereas decreasing the number of
vehicles
 in road by increasing the
petrol
 prices to prevent
traffic
 is not a better option [15:09, 31/12/2021] Poojana: for
this
 crisis without proper management. Albeit, majority of the population using
vehicles
 and rapid increment of the
petrol
 will lead economical effect for their monthly salary budget.
however
, there are many other alternative methods to prevent environmental pollution by the carbon monoxide released by the
petrol
 emission
gases
. As an example electric, solar power and other renewble energy sources
vehicles
 are acceptable preventive method for harmful
gases
 releases by the carbon fuel.
Otherwise
 it will lead economical problem for the populatio
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