In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extant do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays,
technology
is
ever increasing
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than before. It has been argued that
people
will more likely to have
information
online.
However
, others believe that the role of
newspaper
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and
book
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can not be replaced.
To begin
with, the possibility of reading
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online
news
instead
of the traditional ones has plausible outcomes. The
fastest growing
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technology
tend
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to provide
real time
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information
to readers so they can get easy access everywhere and anytime.
For instance
,
people
can read any kind of
news
from
computer
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or mobile phone
that is
supported by
internet
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.
Moreover
, the current situation of
covid-19
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pandemic reduces the interaction among humans. By getting and reading
information
online without paying will minimise the spread of disease and keep them safe.
On the other hand
, there are some reasons why
people
buy printed
newspapers
and
books
.
People
, especially the old ones, are usually not supported
with
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the
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smartphone. They are more adapted
with
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the old version of
mobile
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phone
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so they might prefer to read
news
from printed
newspapers
or
books
.
Furthermore
, buying
newspapers
or
books
from the store can help
people
who are not common with
technology
like highlighting the words or sentences on the printed
newspapers
or
book
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books
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. To sum up, both sides of
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regarding the possibility of
technology driven
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or
books
have strong support, yet I believe that in the future
people
are more likely to read online
news
. They can receive
real time
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information
and limit the interaction among humans due to
current
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covid-19 situation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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