Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things .Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion .

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Nowadays ,it is said that advertising can convince

people

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to buy the products successfully .But there are some individuals who believed that advertising is a normal thing and do not pay any attention to them .In

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,essay we will discuss both views of

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statement . On the one hand ,the advertising is strong persuading

people

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for using goods .To elaborate more ,the company employ some strategies for deceiving

people

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on different platforms

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as TV ,websites and social media on the internet .

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,the television illustrates eating ice cream near your family and your friends and

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it can make you glad .

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, it affects you to make a decision to go shopping and buy delicious ice cream .

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,some of the individuals say the advertising is common and do not believe the advertising power due to a few reasons . One of them is the advertisement makes them boring and when they see it ,they skip it as soon as they can .

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,when the TV is shown shoes advertising ,

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off the TV quickly .Another one is too many ads .It means that when there is a large volume of advertising can be tedious .

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,it cannot stimulate and anyone does not pay attention and do not purchase these products .I follow the opponents of

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view because the ads make me angry . To sum up ,as I mentioned in the essay , advertising can deceive individuals to buy their goods .But another point of

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view is the advertisement might be boring and tedious .In my ,opinion the

second

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view is correct and I agree

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

283 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

persuade
promote
attract
influence
impact
consumerism
commercialism
market
product
brand
endorsement
manipulative
saturated
overwhelmed
repetitive
distracting
irrelevant
exaggerated
misleading
desensitized

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things .Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion .

Your opinion

With a growing world population, many people believe that we should focus on producing more GM foods. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?

What can be done to maintain biodiversity?

Some people believe environmental problems require global attention whereas some believe they can be dealt with on a national level. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Some employers of er their employees subsidised membership of gyms and sports clubs,believing that this will make their staf healthier and thus more ef ective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people say in order to prevent illness and diseases, governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?