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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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'Only work and no play makes jack dull' the saying goes well equally for society who love to enjoy playing and listening to
music
. That's why
people
 believe that '
music
' encourages togetherness among
individuals
 of various cultures and ages. In my opinion, I totally agree with the aforesaid notion.
This
 essay will elaborate on the same in the upcoming paragraphs.
Firstly
, every nation has an incredible heritage of
music
 of its own style and the
people
, who are keen
music
 lovers always try to find something new than their own culture.
In other words
, the interest in songs, musical instruments make
people
 explore worldwide and in
this
 journey, they meet like-minded
individuals
, that brings
people
 together.
For instance
, in my city, 'Nashik', India, a musical fest called 'Sula fest' is held every year which attracts citizens of all over the world. Resultantly it is the best opportunity for
people
 to interact, find friends and build relationships among them.
Secondly
, as the rock is an inseparable aspect of rituals, celebrations and parties,
individuals
 not only from different cultures but
also
 of different ages come together.
In addition
 to that, young and old
people
 forget their conflicts and enjoy collectively that making their relationship grow. To exemplify, at my cousin Karan's wedding party, my uncle forgave Karan's mistakes and danced with him to highly energetic 'Bhangra'
music
 and the total happiness was spread in the air. In conclusion,
music
 makes
people
 find like-minded friends of different cultures as well as encourages all ages to live in harmony.
Music
 is a true connector among
individuals
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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