In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
As it is evident, driverless and self-driving
cars
and Use synonyms
vehicles
are on the rise and it is no longer it is not far fetched to think, Use synonyms
as a result
of Linking Words
this
new technology, that one day the role of the driver will utterly fall to the machines and we will assume the role of passenger. some may see Linking Words
this
as advantageous. Linking Words
In contrast
, others argue that though driverless Linking Words
cars
have their merits they can not replace us. Use synonyms
This
essay will delve deeper and discuss both views.
On one hand, the supporters of autonomous Linking Words
cars
present some very compelling evidence. Use synonyms
Firstly
it has been proven that since autonomous Linking Words
vehicles
are not affected by different human conditions Use synonyms
such
as being tired, they are less prone to make errors. Linking Words
Moreover
, these Linking Words
vehicles
possess sensors which are orders of magnitude of times more accurate than those of humans which, ultimately makes them safer. statistics suggest that they are up to five times less likely to be responsible for an accident than man-driven Use synonyms
vehicles
.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, we can not completely disregard the disadvantages the biggest one of them being the unpredictability that comes with it. These Linking Words
vehicles
, Use synonyms
while
safe, may show some irregular behaviour and the result of it ranges from mild annoyance to a fatal mistake. Linking Words
In addition
to that, when these behaviours happen there is a question of who should be held responsible which opposes an ethical and legal dilemma as well. Linking Words
For instance
, there was an error in self-driving taxi Linking Words
cars
in an American city that made them honk their horns at night which is , fortunately, nothing more than an annoyance, Use synonyms
however
, it shows the unpredictability that they have.
Linking Words
To conclude
, driverless Linking Words
vehicles
, same as every new technology, are not without their fair share of drama. Some may say Use synonyms
that is
safer which is a great advantage as opposed to the ones that highlight its issues of which it has several. I personally, think its advantages do outweigh the disadvantages. I believe Linking Words
while
we still have a long way to go, someday, we will reach a point where Linking Words
cars
will become a mere tool driving us from point to point without us interfering.Use synonyms
Submitted by parsaj1381 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Task Achievement
Ensure that the essay addresses all parts of the task clearly and completely. Explain both the advantages and disadvantages more thoroughly.
Task Achievement
While your ideas are clear overall, they can be more compelling if you provide specific examples and strengthen your points with detailed evidence.
General Writing Advice
There are a few grammatical inaccuracies that don't greatly impact understanding, but it's beneficial to revise for grammar and clarity, particularly in areas where sentences are long or complex.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your essay could benefit from a more systematic use of linking phrases to enhance the flow and coherence between different paragraphs and ideas.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, guiding the reader through the discussion effectively.
Task Achievement
You've presented both sides of the argument, which is essential for a balanced essay.
Task Achievement
You have utilized some effective comparisons and predictions on the impacts of driverless vehicles, which adds depth to your argument.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?