the charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019
The given line graphs illustrate the percentage of households including electronic equipment and
number
of hours spent Correct article usage
the number
for
housework during a week from 1920 to 2019
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on
Overall
, the first graph indicates the upward trends in three households with electronic appliances while
second
one reports Correct article usage
the second
downward
in Correct article usage
a downward
number
of hours of housework
The refrigerator was at its lowest amount Add an article
the number
that
was 0% in 1920 and Correct pronoun usage
which
vacuum
cleaner was at 30 % at that time. After that, both figures saw Correct article usage
the vacuum
the
dramatic increases until 1980 to 100 % and 80 % respectively. Correct article usage
apply
Then
, refrigerator
remained stable for 20 years and stopped in 2020. Correct article usage
the refrigerator
However
, the vacuum cleaner grew up slightly to 100 % in the following year and stayed unchanged until 2019. In terms of washing machine
, there was a fluctuation during these 5 decades.
The time spent Fix the agreement mistake
machines
to use
these households decreased moderately from 50 % to 10% during these periods.Change the verb form
using
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