In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message
In some societies around the world, parents teach their children that they can get whatever they desire by just trying hard. The advantage of
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could lead them to become extremists regarding their wishes.
Nowadays, some communities living on the face of the earth teach their children to work strong and keep on trying for something they need in their Linking Words
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, these teachings develop the mindset of teenagers as responsible citizens and efficient parts of society. Linking Words
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, parents who guide their offspring with the lessons of tough working and to follow their ambition eventually become successful in their career and future. The main advantage is that Linking Words
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On the other hand
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, these people totally ignore their mistakes and weaknesses regarding what they are looking for. Linking Words
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, people who are hard workers but do not utilize their energies in the right direction ends up in frustration and failure.
To conclude, more work is the key to success. With hard work we can achieve everything but hardworking in the right direction along with the understanding of the mission will lead to success.Linking Words
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