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Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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Many high
school
students
 take
break
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 and start working in any particular field before
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of
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their
further
studies
. Some of them travel to places to make themselves feel relaxed and others start working to support their family
by
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financially.What are the advantages or disadvantages of
this
, which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs
.
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 In high
school
, there are many
students
 who belong to different families and financial backgrounds.
For those
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 who
belongs
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 to rich families do not worry about anything but
for
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those who
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 sound financially well
always
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 willing to work after high
school
 vacation and support their family. By doing
this
, they start getting
matured
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 and make their decision wisely. Apart from that, they gain certain experiences as well which can help them in their
future
 and
also
 gain some information about subjects or fields for their
future
studies
.
However
, taking
break
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 between
studies
 is not at all a good idea. Because it can affect on
studies
 as well as many
students
 might
loose
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thier
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their
 interest in
study
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the study
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.
For instance
, people tend to
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loose
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 their skills by taking
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break
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 in their daily activities and
same
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the same
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 goes for
students
 as well because continuity is the only key
which
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 can make anyone skilled and composed.
Moreover
,
students
 leave high
school
 at
very
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 early age when they are 15 to 16 years old and that age is the period where
students
 should study well and shape their career in a good way
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 can lead them to
the
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 successful
future
. To summarise, taking
break
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 and work after high
school
 can give life
learnig
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learning
 experience but it
also
 can reflect on your
future
studies
 which can lead many
students
 in
wrong
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the wrong
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 way.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • school leavers
  • real-world experience
  • independence
  • structured environment
  • financial benefits
  • academic momentum
  • gap year
  • rigors
  • sidetracked
  • social disconnect
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