you recently received a letter fron you bank that should have contained a new credit card. Unfortunately, the card was not in the letter. Write a letter to your bank manager. I your letter, Explain what has happened suggest the credit card should be cancelled for security reasons ask when a new credit card can be sent to you.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to let you know that, as a new credit customer I have been expecting a post from your bank with my credit card attached.

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, that was not the scenario. I did receive the postage, but not the card. It looks like the package was opened before its delivery, leading me to suspect theft. Since

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is a pre-authorized card that can go into utilization right out of the box, I would like to request an immediate block and cancellation of it before any transactions are made.

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being a security threat, any purchases made on

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account could

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severely affect my FICO score.

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, I would highly appreciate it if you could ship out a new package as soon as possible, but with a requirement of a signature receipt on the package

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time.

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should help prevent

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tampering and a safe receipt. I eagerly look forward to your response on the same. Yours Faithfully, Jacob

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coherence cohesion

For even better coherence, transitions between paragraphs could be more seamless adding phrases that more clearly link the explanation of the problem to the requested actions.

task achievement

To excel in task response, consider expanding on the potential implications of the theft beyond the FICO score, possibly including concerns about personal security or inconvenience, to demonstrate a broader understanding of the situation.

task achievement

You have successfully completed the task by addressing all parts of the prompt.

coherence cohesion

The overall structure of the letter is logical, progressing smoothly from the explanation of the issue to the request for action.

task achievement

Your writing tone is suitably formal and polite, fitting the context of a letter to a bank manager very well.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

167 words

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