You live in a block of flats, your neighbour makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, you should: •explain the situation •tell him/her how you are affected by this •Suggest what you want the landlord to do.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter to file a
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complaint, with regard to my next-door neighbour. I have been living here for years now and I never faced any particular issue with my neighbours,
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, over the past few weeks, after a new tenant moved
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their apartment next to me, I endured a plethora of issues. Especially, with the unwanted
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that they emit during atypical hours. To elaborate on that, they are reconstructing their flat which understandably makes noises throughout the day, which would not have been a problem if it was not for the late-night parties they host.
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causes a piercing
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, which interferes with my sleep schedule, leading to discrepancies in my function at work.
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, the constant
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has not only disturbed my sleep schedule
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but has
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disturbed my ability to concentrate or relax during
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, I am experiencing immense mental issues and a drop in my occupational performance. For the aforementioned reasons, and to reduce interpersonal conflicts among tenants, I would suggest that you implement quiet hours after 10 PM, as it is already stated in our community guidelines.
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to giving the offenders of the rule a disciplinary note or fine, in order to make sure
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will not occur again. I am looking forward to receiving your response and hopefully to see
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issue resolved. Yours faithfully, Anita Rasouli

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Consider adding more specific examples of how the noise affects your daily life, such as specific instances or activities that have been disrupted.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure your paragraphs transition smoothly from one to the other, perhaps with transitional phrases to enhance flow.
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The tone of the letter is appropriate and respectful, which is important in a formal complaint.
coherence and cohesion
You clearly outline the problems caused by the noise and suggest a practical solution, demonstrating clear thinking.
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