You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on the course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter Describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you have done since the course Suggest another cookery course you would like the school to offer

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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letter in connection with the cookery course I took
last
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summer and to make suggestions for
further
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classes. I believe it is in your best interest to hold better courses. Actually, I have enjoyed taking part in the Italian food course very much. The reason why I had a great time was mostly because of our professional tutor whom I learned has high-ranked restaurants both in New York and Rome. What amazed me the most was the state-of-the-art the art equipment each class is provided with. I have been cooking different Italian meals ever since and the one that I master is bacon spaghetti. I have made various scrumptious pizzas and my family is super content with my cooking lately. anyway, I would like to offer some suggestions on
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courses which I would like to take part in. If it is possible, I would like you to have a pastry course especially for Turkish sweets
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as baklava which is one of the most popular sweets all around the world these days. I am sure if you offer a wider range of classes, the Academy will continue to run profitably as more students you were able to attract.
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is all I would like to share with you. Thank you for taking the time to read
this
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letter. Yours faithfully,
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