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To meet the growing need for food by an increasing population, a country should make use of genetically engineered foods. However, some people believe that such foods are not only unhealthy but affect the nature too. Discuss both the view points and give your own opinion.

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Due to the rapid increase in population, the demand for food is drastically grown. Certain audiences believe that a nation should use genetically modified
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. But some people think that these foods may be dangerous for humans and the ecosystem. From my point of view, I think we have to adapt to
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 foods largely because it produces immense quantity in a lesser area with more nutrition. In
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 essay, I will discuss the pros and cons of
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 new type of modified crop with relevant examples.
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 with, in
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 modern world, the land is precious because of overbuilding. these
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 can grow in much larger quantities compared to the normal crop.
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, it doesn't need excessive use of pesticides and has more nutrients. Corn and Soybean,
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, grown by genetic modification contains more protein and carbs than traditional farming.
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, it can create ten times more quantity in the same land than farming would.
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, there are some drawbacks too.
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, these
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 release toxic gases into the environment which hampers the air quality of the designated area.
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, few societies are allergic to DNA modified vegetables.
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, in the United States of America, certain localities have faced severe health concerns after eating modified vegetables.
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, individuals working in the factories to make these types of
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 faced breathing issues. To conclude, demand for food will increase day by day eventually and in my opinion, genetically engineered
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 will take over the conventional farming method. While it may have some harmful effects, it meets the current demand for food. In the near future, scientists may
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 find a way around these deadly effects and make these
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 more sustainable to use.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Genetically engineered foods
  • Increasing population
  • Growing need for food
  • Unhealthy
  • Affect
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Human health
  • Environment
  • Personal opinion
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