Should young people follow older people’s example or it’s good for them to challenge older people’s opinions and thoughts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
A sizeable proportion of the society put forward an
opinion
that youngsters must obey the instructions of elders, while, there is an equal proportion who consider young adults should be allowed to think and act independently. In this
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both
these perspectives are discussed to arrive at an opinion
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There are a few individuals who think that,
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experience
and they are well equipped to solve a wide range of problems. Older people
have immense knowledge and judgmental skills which they gained through their life experience
as well as from their ancestors. They know different home remedies like traditional medicine for cold and cough and got all these from their ancestors. Hence
, these are the reasons why certain people
believe it is better to follow elder’s
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, there are certain others who support that, youngster
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people
’s thoughts and experience
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people
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Furthermore
, most of the grandparents have the view that women need to do all household chores as it is their responsibility. As these days both
the parents are working it is better to share house activities rather that women along doing all chores. As a consequence, a good number of people
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that is
it good young people
to think and act independently.
In conclusion, after analyzing both
the aspects of, following the older people
’s vision and challenging their thoughts my perspective is that youngsters should consult elder’s opinion
as they have more experience
in handling various
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