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Some believe that stress level 0f people deal with in today’s society has an impact on rising road accidents, But others deny that it has any connection on that it has any connection on that. What is your opinion?

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Nowadays,
road
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accidents
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 have become a leading cause of death and injury as well as property damages. Many
people
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 argue that there is a positive impact anxiety level of individuals may affect
road
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accidents
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 while others believe there is not any related fact to prove
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. In
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 essay, I will discuss the major factors that will lead to cause
road
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accidents
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.Analyzing of lack of rules and regulations, lack of awareness of
people
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 will prove
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 idea.
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 with, most of the drivers do not pay attention to basic rules and regulations that will lead to
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 in the accident rate.
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, even there is a rule to qualify for getting
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 driving license at the age of 18, teenagers tend to drive vehicles in the urban areas and which caused
road
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accidents
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 due to lack of experience.There is not any proper sentence
to
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 those who
violation
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rule
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rules
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such
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 as
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 the driving license of the owner of the vehicle. So
people
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 are not afraid to give their vehicles to teenagers. As well as, most
people
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 did not concern about the traffic sign while they drive. Even some countries use CCTV and track down careless drivers because of the limitation of the regulation they will escape from the punishment .
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,it is clearly stated that the legal act mainly impacts the growth of
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accidents
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.
Secondly
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, the distraction of
passengers
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 on roads is created more hazards wherever densely populated areas.
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, Colombo port is totally busy
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 weekdays.Even seller has given places to sell his/her item ,they tend to sell his/her products on the pavement. So
passengers
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 have to use part of the main
road
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 to avoid interaction. As well as some
people
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 pay attention to things on the pavement while they are strolling. Because of that awareness of
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 ,even drivers
pay
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 attention to driving can cause
road
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accidents
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.
In addition
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 to that,
passengers
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 do not concern about the sign signals and they crossed the
road
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 when they need. Because of
owareness
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awareness
 of those
passengers
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, it would be caused an accident. In conclusion,
Road
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accidents
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 do not depend on a person's anxiety level. It's clearly stated that critical factors on
accidents
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 rate are insufficient rules and regulations , as well as awareness of
people
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.
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