In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
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that. In Linking Words
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essay,I will explore both pros and cons and draw some conclusions.
One of the major plus points of trying hard for their goal is the fact that having a Linking Words
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with a high level of motivation is taught to younger people. Motivation plays a considerable role in people's lives, and I can say Use synonyms
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would not be possible without motivation. Another benefit is that Use synonyms
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suggestion to Linking Words
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may alert them and make them think deeply about the future because ,at early ages,Linking Words
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just think about simple work. Use synonyms
For example
, consider a child who just devotes her/his time to play with her/his friends.When Linking Words
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advice was told to them,they would allocate some time to choose a suitable way and put all her/his effort into their career.It means that they will be completely aware of the importance of hard-working.
Regarding disadvantages,one of the negative effects is that Linking Words
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may be seen as too difficult and tedious because they should try more and more for earning a lot of things. Use synonyms
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result they would get disappointed at an early age, which may have a terrible effect on their mindset. One more thing, choosing an inappropriate approach to Remove the comma
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children
may turn to drugs due to disappointment or they are likely to change their studies or work.Use synonyms
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,they may not choose their interest.
In conclusion,giving Linking Words
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is essential to Use synonyms
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some advantages and disadvantages.They may inspire by Use synonyms
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sentence or they may destroy their Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite