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These days most people prefer not to leave in rural areas. Task: What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in rural areas?

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Over the
last
 decades, a large number of habitant has been embarking to leave villages and to arrive to vibrant cities or to capitals of their countries. The vast majority of the people deem that
life
 in the
city
 provides huge capabilities for the development
in contrast
 to
life
 in the countryside. Others claim that the
city
 area has a slightly more flaw and the rural area is handier for residents. I advocate strongly with the former statement and am going to reflect on the core benefits and drawbacks of living in the countryside. On the one hand, it can be spotted that the number of people, who resides in rural
areas
, has been dwindling substantially throughout the
last
 years.
However
, it would unfair not to mention the fact that the local state departments do not concern about the development of villages and encourage the person on moving to the
city
.
Also
 noteworthy is that the young generation decides to reside in the urban
areas
 because of capacities and styles, which are provided by cities.
Besides
, adolescents try to be enrolled on the universities and colleges, which are located in capitals or in other huge centres of their native countries.
On the other hand
,
life
 in rural
areas
 has a positive side.
First
 of all, the air of the countryside is clear and fresh because of the lack of vehicles.
Secondly
, the pace of rural
life
 is silent and calm.
Thirdly
, the quality of the local food is higher
in contrast
 to the
city
 products. Regardless of these facts, the population is continuing to live in urban
areas
 and remains in the villages on holidays or weekends. In conclusion, I would stress, that
life
 in rural habitats has both positive and negative sides. Even so, the person must decide upon for himself in which place he prefers to reside.
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