Some people believe positive thinking has benefits, while others consider it has drawbacks. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is an often argued issue whether optimistic is good or bad by many debates and TV shows.
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, while some think that positive thinking gives more
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advantages
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trend has some
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disadvantages
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essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons. On the one hand, positive thinking can
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failure in
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in the particular matter.
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, people can do anything whatever
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want without any
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fairness
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can give
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confidence too.
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, Indian army
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warriors
have taken to theirs' own area from China occupied border in Vaga; the spoke man said that about
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victory all the
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warriors
had positive thought,
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, we achieved
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, if a person has positive thoughts, he would be achieved anything in his
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and
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can be motivated in all
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to do something in
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,
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trend has some drawbacks undoubtedly; always being
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optimistic is not possible and
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can forget to
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analyse
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negatives is the best planning of
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positive thinking can be ended with
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failures
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, in the pandemic
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the authority has only positive thinking
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do to rescue folks from
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virus
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as corona, as consequences, the death rate will be increased tremendously,
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,
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side of thinking is the best for avoiding
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. To conclude, positive thinking gives more confidence, hope, and
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to folks can achieve anything
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theirs'
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victory
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both sides positive and negative can avoid
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facing any hazardous
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. Even though, in my opinion, about
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, positive thinking has more benefits than drawbacks. I hope
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process is conducive to being a confident person
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the world.
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