Some people believe that it is the government’s responsibility to provide care and finance to support people after they retire. Others, however, think that individuals themselves should save money in their own when they are old. Discuss both views and give your opinion. > DISCUSS AND OPINION

It is an often argued issue whether the authority takes

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of elder people or they take

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of

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themselves

by many TV shows and debates.

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, some think that the

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should be taken responsibility to give financial help

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elder folks; while others say that the

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folks should

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care

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themselve

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themselves

like savings and insurances.

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essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons. On the one hand, the

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government

should provide

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financial support for

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the old

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population because they were the once

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when they were working and the authority used theirs'

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for

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the countrys'

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infrastructure advancement.

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, the

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should

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to

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retirement

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folks by giving financial support like free medical amenities,

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the minimum

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amount of monthly pension and discount

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for grocery items.

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,

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India gives every month Rs 1000 for theirs' residences who are getting above sixty,

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, they can manage theirs' expenses.

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, the

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should be provided

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related aid for above sixty persons.

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, an individual old person should

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care

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by themselves namely savings and insurances. To be elaborate, they should save a minimum amount of capital for their's old age when they were being young.

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, in India has

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started

a new policy of provident fund in companies,

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especially

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age persons,

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, they can take

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money

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in after

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stage.

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,

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way certainly

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to an old man can be managed to theirs' expenses. To conclude, senior citizens should

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care

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by

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the

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nemely

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namely

providing

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aids and free medical supports; an individual man should be saved a minimum amount of capital for theirs'

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period. In my opinion, about

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, the government should be provided financial aid for

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elder population.