Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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to educate the brain
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and so on.
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television
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Consequently
,
television
is one of the choices which the majority of people select to learn because it is easy to understand and access.
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easier than text because of the motion picture or sound.
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feel boring and quit
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time. To illustrate, when they look
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the book which have entire
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skill
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for thinking fantasy and learning new language
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who obtain knowledge from
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can accomplish faster than
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from papers.
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provides distinct
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which focus only on usable data.
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present with detail and do not show the intro so much.
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skill
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time more than other people.
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television
is helpful for
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group because they can listen and look
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picture
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have a more obvious advantage over the book and can improve language skills and imagination.
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