The internet has changed the way the information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. what are the problems associated with it and what solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays, technology has advanced development in the 21st century and it affects some detrimental issues. There are several undoubted reasons and certain specific ways to address
this
problem.
Primarily, a lot of free information is provided through the internet
. The majority of people use the internet
more than 8 hours a day by getting various news from any website. Consequently
, society like to share anything including their secret data on their social media
such
as Facebook and Instagram. They sometimes also
do not aware about
their privacy, of course, it leads to cybercrime. Change preposition
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Moreover
, another critical obstacle, cyberbullying, mostly happens to children and causes bad impacts on their mental health. It can also
cause kids to feel unhappy, sad, and insecure.
However
, the potential ways to tackle this
problem may include the following. Initially
, each individual should not post any important pictures on social media
so the criminals can not screenshot or capture any important facts. In addition
, the government should also
provide filters to all websites on the internet
that potentially increase the negative impacts on the youth. For instance
, enabling icons or buttons on the website to limit the harmful content and hateful comments. The two very famous social media
, Facebook and Instagram, have already protected their users from cyberbullying and cybercrime. Thus
, the Government of Indonesia should also
update the regulation of social media
usage.
To sum up, the increasing use of the internet
in daily life has bad effects on all human beings. It seems that each nation should limit sharing photos on their social media
and the Ministry ought to take a firm and stand on this
issue.Submitted by noviburg28 on
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