Some people think that young people should choose their professions themselves. Others believe that their parents should choose for them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Choosing a major in advanced education to help make your career is a crucial moment in one's early adult phase. Many might find it challenging to determine having lived in teen years only. On the one hand, a way to help youngsters make a decision is to get help from
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On the other hand
, young people must choose for themselves to make it better suited to their preferences. In Linking Words
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essay, I will provide my take on these views.
Raising Linking Words
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parents
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Parents
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children
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parents
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However
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parents
decide might not always be best tailored to their Use synonyms
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Meanwhile, decision-making might be one of the best ways to prepare Use synonyms
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for their future Use synonyms
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. They have to understand that they can not rely on the help of others all the time. Making a decision by themselves and being validated by their Use synonyms
parents
might benefit their expected psychological growth. Use synonyms
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children
's characteristics and interests may change over time. Teenagers are more likely to withdraw from their Use synonyms
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and spend more time with their peer groups. Use synonyms
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parents
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parents
only want what is best for their Use synonyms
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However
, insisting on their will might cause some unnecessary trauma later. Linking Words
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be prepared to overcome difficulties in their Linking Words
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. To conclude, I believe both aspects are beneficial for Use synonyms
children
to choose the best profession for themselves. Everything, Use synonyms
however
, must be done in moderation.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite