Some people think that young people should choose their professions themselves. Others believe that their parents should choose for them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Choosing a major in advanced education to help make your career is a crucial moment in one's early adult phase. Many might find it challenging to determine having lived in teen years only. On the one hand, a way to help youngsters make a decision is to get help from
parents
. On the other hand
, young people must choose for themselves to make it better suited to their preferences. In this
essay, I will provide my take on these views.
Raising children
for their whole lives
makes parents
understand their children
's upbringing entirely. Parents
would know what their children
's skills and interests are. Moreover
, children
will most likely take after their parents
, and parents
would want their children
to follow in their footsteps. These are some of the parents
' advantages in choosing the best profession for their children
. However
, what parents
decide might not always be best tailored to their children
's interests.
Meanwhile, decision-making might be one of the best ways to prepare children
for their future lives
. They have to understand that they can not rely on the help of others all the time. Making a decision by themselves and being validated by their parents
might benefit their expected psychological growth. Besides
, children
's characteristics and interests may change over time. Teenagers are more likely to withdraw from their parents
and spend more time with their peer groups. This
might make parents
less understand their children
in their later lives
.
After all, parents
only want what is best for their children
. However
, insisting on their will might cause some unnecessary trauma later. Children
must also
be prepared to overcome difficulties in their lives
. To conclude, I believe both aspects are beneficial for children
to choose the best profession for themselves. Everything, however
, must be done in moderation.Submitted by suci.suyanto on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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- however
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