Some people believe that giving longer prison sentences is the best way to reduce crime. Others believe that there are better ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In the 21st century, human
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increasing number of crime cases in our society.
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essay, I will explain both views with relevant examples. Correctional settlement and its long-term adaptation enhance public awareness against non-violence because these provisions motivate fear, concern and refusal of criminal activities.
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, the country like Norway,Sweden and Finland
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as the lowest crime rates against women. Another key thing to remember, these countries applied
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long sentences for personal crimes thereby
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public opposition against rape,sexual abuse and domestic violence.
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mitigate a person's behavioural problems
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revengeful activities.To support
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, criminals like sociopaths and cannibals need a separate living space from the community because they are genetically vulnerable.So they cannot make a normal
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, the modern society there are many correctional
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are available.
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, psychological interventions like psychosocial analysis, counselling therapy and behaviour modification therapy
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many positive changes in the minds of criminals .
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, the invention of criminal settlement
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non-violence. To illustrate
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, According to the American psychological association, human settlement
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like imparting education and employment generation reduced 75% of reformation among abusers.
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, social welfare policies and administration for abolishing exploitation, human trafficking ,social inequalities and prostitution
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mentally healthier citizens because it helps progressive socialization between all
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. In conclusion, there is a saying 'a coin has two sides'
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any correctional
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have constructive and destructive results.
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, the government and social authorities make sure that their interventions should be appropriate for all
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