Some people believe that giving longer prison sentences is the best way to reduce crime. Others believe that there are better ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the 21st century, human
life
became more complex whereby these changes
result
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increasing number of crime cases in our society.
Thus
, some
people
supported
like
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life
long sentences but others contended for reformative
programs
for
this
problem. In
this
essay, I will explain both views with relevant examples. Correctional settlement and its long-term adaptation enhance public awareness against non-violence because these provisions motivate fear, concern and refusal of criminal activities.
For example
, the country like Norway,Sweden and Finland
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as the lowest crime rates against women. Another key thing to remember, these countries applied
life
long sentences for personal crimes thereby
to generate
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public opposition against rape,sexual abuse and domestic violence.
Besides
this
, long-term prison
life
mitigate a person's behavioural problems
although
, it curtails
further
revengeful activities.To support
this
, criminals like sociopaths and cannibals need a separate living space from the community because they are genetically vulnerable.So they cannot make a normal
life
with other
people
.
However
, the modern society there are many correctional
of
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programs
are available.
Firstly
, psychological interventions like psychosocial analysis, counselling therapy and behaviour modification therapy
promotes
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many positive changes in the minds of criminals .
Secondly
, the invention of criminal settlement
programs
deprive
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non-violence. To illustrate
this
, According to the American psychological association, human settlement
programs
like imparting education and employment generation reduced 75% of reformation among abusers.
Thirdly
, social welfare policies and administration for abolishing exploitation, human trafficking ,social inequalities and prostitution
brings
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mentally healthier citizens because it helps progressive socialization between all
people
. In conclusion, there is a saying 'a coin has two sides'
similarly
any correctional
programs
have constructive and destructive results.
For instance
, the government and social authorities make sure that their interventions should be appropriate for all
people
.
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