These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are reasons for this and how could the problem be solved?

Teaching is a noble
profession
, but these days youths are not considering their career option as a teacher especially for junior high
school
or for primary
school
levels. more or less
this
problem has been noticed all over the globe.
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essay, we will discuss
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actual reasons and some proposed solutions for
this
issue. The
first
cause of
this
is the low pay scale for teachers respective to other professionals, whereas for the same year of experience the educators get less salary than other skilled people like doctors, engineers and accountants. Surprisingly there is not much social value for the student guides
moreover
, students
also
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with
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their
the
other
tutors. Teaching is itself a very hectic job in spite of that they are always loaded with a huge work pressure like notes preparation, exam marking, and other
school
activities all
thses
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these
the
responsibilites
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responsibilities
makes their job physically and mentally demanding. To attract the youngsters toward the teaching sector government should raise the salary for them as well as parents need to make sure that there
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children
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should not misbehave with the tutors.
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government and
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society
needs
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orgnize
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appriciation
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appreciation
ceremony every
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and all
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teachers
should be awarded
as a result
people will get attracted towards
this
profession
. As mentioned they are always filled with workload
school
administration needs to consider appointing
assitant
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assistant
teachers for their support. To sum up, teaching is a less popular job because there is a lack of financial stability as well as no social reputation in
this
profession
furthermore
They are extremely pressurized with work as result, people are not willing to join
this
sector. Without a doubt, I can say that teachers are the nurture of our society and it is high time to think about them.
This
is my firm belief that by taking some necessary steps we can resolve
this
issue,
for example
, the government can take necessary steps to provide incentive and other financial support for them as well as by encouragement from society can
also
help the get inclination towards
this
profession
.
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