You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him/her your other news.

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Dear Ravi, I am writing

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letter to tell you, I started a new job in a mechanical company as a manager, recently. I hope you will be happy to hear

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news because you know I had a childhood dream to join a mechanical company. Well, I belonged from a mechanical background and my study was

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in the same field so, I tried for so many years to join any reputated mechanical company. It not only helped me to explore new inventions in

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field but

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gave me opportunities to follow my passion. I learned to deal with problems on a higher level and how from conflicts between the employees. I

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deal with new companies to get new investors. At

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, I want to tell you I am getting married very soon so, you need to come sure with your family. I am for

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for waiting

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your reply on my achievement. Best regards,

Xas

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Xmas

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

157 words

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You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him/her your other news.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Today more and more people want things instantly (eg: goods, service, news). Why is this? Is it positive or negative development?

Some think they can use as much fresh water as they want, but others say governments should limit water use because it’s not endless. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Caring for children is an important thing of the society it is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take child care training courses to what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, there is a growing concern about the quality of education. What are the reasons behind this issue, and what measures can be taken to improve the education system?