Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it is positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In the twenty-

first

century, due to the advancement of technology,

computers

will become more intelligent than human beings.

This

is a controversial issue because it both has advantages and disadvantages.

Thus

this

essay will explore before reaching any conclusion. Gradually,

people

will lose control of work and even live because of the intelligence of

computers

. Indeed, currently, they count on

computers

to do many things that are not necessary. As a consequence, the practical skill will disappear and they are unable to do it independently .

For instance

computers

are replacing various jobs of humans that seriously contribute to unemployment.

Moreover

, some

people

argue that with more intelligent

computers

come more detrimental effects.

In particular

, it can observe

people

’s behaviour and steal private information. Considering the positive side, the development of

computers

can advance the quality of humans’ lives . In modern times, it helps

people

explore and research science and the universe which was impossible in the past.

In addition

, thanks to the intelligence of

computers

people

save more time when doing work with extreme schedules.

For example

, recently, staff who work in the bank can avoid many mistakes because of the accuracy of

computers

. Some opinions consider that it plays a crucial role in developing automatic machines

such

as robots and AI. From my point of view, the control of

computers

has some limitations so it might be dangerous if

computers

become more intelligent than human beings. In conclusion, despite having some benefits of

this

development, humans need to strictly manage systems of

computers

to preserve their future life.

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Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it is positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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