Some people prefer to have temporary jobs, which means they only work a few months in a year and use the rest of the time to do what they want. What is your opinion?
Nowadays, individuals like to have jobs that
last
for a couple of months in a year and spend the rest of the time
doing whatever they want. In this
situation, there are several benefits and also
some drawbacks.
On the one hand, I think people
who choose to do a temporary career and use the other time
to do what they want is beneficial. Firstly
, they may need a higher awareness of time
and money management. Secondly
, the individuals would like to use less time
to work
so their earnings may not be quite as well as those who chose to work
with less rest time
. In order to do whatever they want without a career, they may need better time
and money management. Lastly
, those who chose a short-period business may have more spare time
to recover their body.
On the other hand
, there are several drawbacks to be considered. The main disadvantage is the job and the salary may be unstable for people
to make the decision to work
for a short period of time
. Secondly
, they may not be suitable for people
who already have a family. In my opinion, the money for temporary jobs may not be enough to raise a family especially for those with kids. Finally
, the taxable profit for a country like Taiwan may not be benefitted from the people
who chose to have a temporary job since their yearly earnings may not reach the basic standard need to pay tax.
In conclusion, I believe there are several pros for the people
who make the choice to work
a few months. At the same time
, we can not ignore the drawbacks at the same time
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