In some countries, celebrities complain about the way the media publicize their private lives. Some people say that they should accept it as part of their fame. Do you agree or disagree?

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Celebrities
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in certain particular countries find fault when the
media
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presents their private
lives
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to the general public through certain sources
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as Television programmes, Social
media
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, and magazines.And
people
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have
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weird thought process that these celebs should accept
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as a part of being popular, I completely disagree with
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statement.
Firstly
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personal life issues and problems are not things that are meant to be publicized,
that is
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why it's called a private life in the
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place. Every human in
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world needs privacy in dealing with their day to day problems, The
last
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thing a celeb would want is the
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publicizing his or her public life with certain added factors of false information.
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, The breakup between 2 popular
celebrities
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namely Shawn Mendez and Camila Cabelo went viral on the internet, everyone was talking about it and fantasizing about what could have happened all because of the
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.The
media
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should avoid digging into the private
lives
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of
celebrities
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as it blows away their privacy. And
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, when
media
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publicize personal
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of these superstars they add value and certain false information so that the viewers are entertained by the news, it's basically a false assumption and we viewers do not actually know what happened,
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in certain situations
celebrities
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are judged for what they do, most of these judgements are not in favour of the celebrity.
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, Popular singer and songwriter The Weeknd released a song called after hours,
people
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were so judgemental they thought the Weeknd was a psychotic freak with intentions to hurt, as per what the
media
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proclaimed. In conclusion, all
celebrities
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should be left alone when dealing with their private
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,
people
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should understand that their matters do not concern us, why does the
media
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need to publicize that? It should stop because publicizing is not very ethical even though it can come up with entertainment and things for
people
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to gossip about.
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