Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others,however,believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In my opinion, I think I agree that

parents

should be the

one

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teaching their

children

on

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how to be

a good members

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of

society

. In

this

essay, I will try to

further

elaborate

both

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side

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of these views, and give my reason as to why I agree

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the

first

view.

Parents

are the

first

members of

society

that

children

will encounter in their lives. So, I support

this

view because of

this

simple reason. If their

parents

themselves cannot teach their

children

how to behave in

society

, how do we expect

children

to learn from others

.

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Children

will inevitably learn from their

parents

since they are the people they meet

everyday

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and spend most of their time with during their childhood. With some

exception

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of foster

children

, which they will learn most things from their

caretaker

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that will become their parent figure in their lives. For the

second

view, I think I can understand a little where they are coming from.

Children

go to

school

everday

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everyday

every day

,

thus

people will think that it is the

school

's responsibility.

Teachers

can never give their full attention to each

children

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. Because of

this

, I think

children

cannot fully learn through their

teachers

as much as they learn from their

parents

. We cannot

also

guarantee that every

school

will have the same standard for teaching. So the responsibility will eventually

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up with the

parents

of each

children

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. To conclude, I can say that even though

children

go to

school

every day and it will be the place

that

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they will spend most of their time during the day. Schools ability to teach their

children

are limited by the capability of their

teachers

to care

each

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child. Whilst

teachers

are responsible for many

children

at the

school

.

Thus

, they cannot

full

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give their attention to each

children

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to teach them well enough.

Therefore

, it is better for

parents

to teach their

children

on

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how to be

a good members

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of

society

. Since

,

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parents

will be able to give more attention

for

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their

children

and will be able to spend more time with their

children

.