The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs illustrate the differences in the proportion of households with 3 means of electrical appliances, namely washing machine, refrigerator, and vacuum cleaner, and display the
number
of hours
people
spent doing housework
per week per household in one country in 6 different years
with the twenty years
interval, starting from 1920.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen from the first graph that people
were owning more electrical appliances throughout the years
1920-2019. However
, within these years
, there was a continuous decline in the number
of hours
of housework
people
did per week.
The first line graph shows that the percentage
of households with refrigerators started at the lowest spot, which was almost 0 and then
rose dramatically to 90% by the year
1960. Twenty years
later, in 1980, the percentage
increased moderately to 100%, the highest among all in this
year
, and remained stable all the way long to 2019. The percentage
of households with vacuum cleaners had the second
greatest percentage
at its start in 1920 with 30%. Its percentage
increased steadily to 90% by the year
1980, and then
slowly increased to 100% in 2000 before it became constant afterward
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Lastly
, the washing machine,
started at 40%, the highest Remove the comma
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percentage
in 1920. The percentage
of the
washing machine rose moderately to 70% in the Correct article usage
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year
1960, reaching its peak, then
slightly decreased in 1980 and finally
increased at a constant rate with approximately 75% in 2019.
In 1920, people
tended to do a lot of housework
as the number
of hours
spent doing housework
was up to 50. The number
of hours
continuously went down to 15% in 1980, then
remained the same until 2000 before it slightly dropped again to approximately 10% in the year
2019.Submitted by creammicom on
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