The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs illustrate the differences in the proportion of households with 3 means of electrical appliances, namely washing machine, refrigerator, and vacuum cleaner, and display the
number
of Use synonyms
hours
Use synonyms
people
spent doing Use synonyms
housework
per week per household in one country in 6 different Use synonyms
years
with the twenty Use synonyms
years
interval, starting from 1920.
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Overall
, it can be clearly seen from the first graph that Linking Words
people
were owning more electrical appliances throughout the Use synonyms
years
1920-2019. Use synonyms
However
, within these Linking Words
years
, there was a continuous decline in the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
hours
of Use synonyms
housework
Use synonyms
people
did per week.
The first line graph shows that the Use synonyms
percentage
of households with refrigerators started at the lowest spot, which was almost 0 and Use synonyms
then
rose dramatically to 90% by the Linking Words
year
1960. Twenty Use synonyms
years
later, in 1980, the Use synonyms
percentage
increased moderately to 100%, the highest among all in Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
year
, and remained stable all the way long to 2019. The Use synonyms
percentage
of households with vacuum cleaners had the Use synonyms
second
greatest Linking Words
percentage
at its start in 1920 with 30%. Its Use synonyms
percentage
increased steadily to 90% by the Use synonyms
year
1980, and Use synonyms
then
slowly increased to 100% in 2000 before it became constant Linking Words
afterward
. Change the spelling
afterwards
Lastly
, the washing machineLinking Words
,
started at 40%, the highest Remove the comma
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percentage
in 1920. The Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
the
washing machine rose moderately to 70% in the Correct article usage
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year
1960, reaching its peak, Use synonyms
then
slightly decreased in 1980 and Linking Words
finally
increased at a constant rate with approximately 75% in 2019.
In 1920, Linking Words
people
tended to do a lot of Use synonyms
housework
as the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
hours
spent doing Use synonyms
housework
was up to 50. The Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
hours
continuously went down to 15% in 1980, Use synonyms
then
remained the same until 2000 before it slightly dropped again to approximately 10% in the Linking Words
year
2019.Use synonyms
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