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Some universities are offering online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

#universities #courses #alternative #classes #campus #development
The online
education
system
 submits
a
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 alternative way for the
students
whose
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who
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 study in the university and
this
system
 has a logical improvement. We are in the
internet
 era, so there is a good link between
the
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technnology
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technology
 and the learning
system
. But, sometimes the technology has
revage
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revenge
 on the
education
system
. In
this
 essay, I would like to explain
plus
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 and minus sides
to
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 the online
education
system
.
The online
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Online
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 classes have some good
effect
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effects
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 on the university learning
system
 as time and
money saving
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money-saving
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.
Firstly
, the
students
 can spend less money than the
campus
 lectures as they don't pay for
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transportation.
Secondly
,
Students
 can stay at home and they don't waste their time on the way as
in
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 the bus or for wearing and
preapering
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preparing
 time for the school.
Finally
, people
has
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have
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 many chooses on the
internet
 like a different lesson which the
students
 don't find in the real university.
For instance
, if you choose a
departmant
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department
 and the part of
campus
 classes, you restrict with
campus
 classes, but if you prefer the online course, you have limitless options. The
internet
 age has some bad impact on our
life
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 and
this
 is true for the online
education
 as less
consantrate
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concentrate
concentrated
 and motivation.
Furthermore
,
student's
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students'
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 concern is not much as
the
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campus
 learning and
the
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virtual class,
also
 when they
on
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are on
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 the
internet
, they tend to make
different
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the different
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 activity as
a
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playing
game
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games
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 or
a
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searching social media.
For example
,
a
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an
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 undergrad will look
alternative
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at alternative
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 part of
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opportunity
opputunity
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the opputunity
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 of the
internet
, when they will be bored
on
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with
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 the online course. In conclusion,
the
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technology is a reality which increasing our life, for
this
 reason, we can not
denied
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deny
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this
 growing wave,
also
 we have to keep up
this
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 technology and introduce
into
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it into
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to
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our
education
system
.
However
, we need to find a solution and build a bridge between new and old
education
 systems for
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solving problems.
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