The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
A gradual decrease in the
quality
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people
's well-being is becoming a topic of concern amongst the masses, and it is predicted to keep falling. The essay strongly agrees that a rising number of health Use synonyms
issues
is associated with increased environmental Use synonyms
issues
and the lack of conscious healthy choices in modern life.
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Firstly
, mankind is facing an extreme decline in the Linking Words
quality
of necessities Use synonyms
such
as water and air. Not only is the purity and cleanliness of water decreasing, Linking Words
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but it
also
becoming more and more apparent that the use of devices meant to purify water is actually leading to mineral leeching. There is Linking Words
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a lot of evidence that suggests clear links between Air Linking Words
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and the exponential increase in respiratory Use synonyms
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such
as Asthma, Lung cancer and Hypersensitivity reactions. Linking Words
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, the general populace in Delhi, India have lungs that are similar to ones that belong to a chronic smoker Linking Words
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as a result
of industries and factories.
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Secondly
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people
seem to invest a lot less time in their physical well-being as compared to before. Use synonyms
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this
is not always an active choice. Most Linking Words
people
are working more than 10 hours a day, leaving behind little to no time or energy for basic activities like cooking a healthy meal or taking a walk. If the ongoing trend of overworking and ignoring one's mental and physical needs continues, we are likely to see a significant rise in comorbidities Use synonyms
such
as obesity, hypertension and Cardiac dysfunction. A study in 2020, conducted by All India Institute of Medical Sciences showed that an average individual walks only one-quarter of the distance covered by Linking Words
people
in the early 90s.
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To conclude
, there is an increasing risk of health Linking Words
issues
as the Use synonyms
quality
of wellness continues to decrease. It is agreed upon that lifestyle choices and increasing pollution play a major role in the expected decline.Use synonyms
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