The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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A gradual decrease in the
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of
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's well-being is becoming a topic of concern amongst the masses, and it is predicted to keep falling. The essay strongly agrees that a rising number of health
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is associated with increased environmental
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and the lack of conscious healthy choices in modern life.
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, mankind is facing an extreme decline in the
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of necessities
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as water and air. Not only is the purity and cleanliness of water decreasing,
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but it
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becoming more and more apparent that the use of devices meant to purify water is actually leading to mineral leeching. There is
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a lot of evidence that suggests clear links between Air
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and the exponential increase in respiratory
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such
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as Asthma, Lung cancer and Hypersensitivity reactions.
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, the general populace in Delhi, India have lungs that are similar to ones that belong to a chronic smoker
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immense air pollution
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of industries and factories.
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,
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seem to invest a lot less time in their physical well-being as compared to before.
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is not always an active choice. Most
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are working more than 10 hours a day, leaving behind little to no time or energy for basic activities like cooking a healthy meal or taking a walk. If the ongoing trend of overworking and ignoring one's mental and physical needs continues, we are likely to see a significant rise in comorbidities
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as obesity, hypertension and Cardiac dysfunction. A study in 2020, conducted by All India Institute of Medical Sciences showed that an average individual walks only one-quarter of the distance covered by
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in the early 90s.
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, there is an increasing risk of health
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as the
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of wellness continues to decrease. It is agreed upon that lifestyle choices and increasing pollution play a major role in the expected decline.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Standard of health
  • 2. Average
  • 3. Lower
  • 4. Future
  • 5. Aging population
  • 6. Chronic diseases
  • 7. Sedentary lifestyle
  • 8. Lack of exercise
  • 9. Poor dietary habits
  • 10. Environmental pollution
  • 11. Technological advancements
  • 12. Impact on health
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