Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Recently, an issue related to if
museums
should charge for admission has been widely discussed among people the world over. Some argue that Use synonyms
museums
should be opened for free. As far as the economy, cultural expansion are concerned, I strongly hold that Use synonyms
museums
should charge for acceptance.
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To begin
with, it is a huge expenditure to maintain a Linking Words
museum
. The cost of facilities and staff as well as buying new Use synonyms
exhibits
should be covered by the income from selling tickets. Use synonyms
In addition
, charging could be beneficial to the expansion of culture. Linking Words
For instance
, the Linking Words
museum
of our city is free for acceptance. But its Use synonyms
exhibits
have low quality and the facilities are old even damaged. No one is interested in it. Many individuals even do not know it because the Use synonyms
museum
does not have enough money to advertise itself.
It is undeniable that charging reduces the number of visitors. Use synonyms
However
, people always ignore things for free and pay more attention to those things that need money. In order to make the cost is worthy, visitors would appreciate the Linking Words
exhibits
carefully so that the effect of cultural expansion can be improved. Use synonyms
For example
, my friend Yu Qian always go to a Linking Words
museum
for cooling himself in summer without appreciating the Use synonyms
exhibits
. He reduced the frequency of going to the Use synonyms
museum
but paid more attention to the Use synonyms
exhibits
themselves after the Use synonyms
museum
charged for admission.
In conclusion, I suppose that the advantages of charging people for admission to Use synonyms
museums
outweigh the disadvantages. Charging for acceptance has more benefits to expanding our culture.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite