Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to you to express my deepest sadness about the noise
came
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that came

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from my flat,
last
Wednesday.
Last
Wednesday, my boyfriend and I were invited our friends to celebrate our engagement. There were nine people at the house that night. Our one friend sang a song till 2 pm very loudly. Unfortunately, we did not realize how loud she was and what time it was, due to alcohol. We had never thought our
neighbor’s
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neighbors
neighbor

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might have disturbed because of noise. There were no words to describe my feelings about
this
issue. All I want to say is, I am so sorry and I am apologizing
you
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to you

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about that night. I will give you a promise
about
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apply

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that action will never occur again. We have decided to make these kinds of celebrations at restaurants rather than at home.
Also
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,Also

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we will be more careful about our guest’s
behaviors
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behaviours

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. Sincerely, Ezgi Koçak
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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