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In some countries, an increaseing number of people are suffering from from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. it is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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These days many individuals are suffering from health problems because of their eating habits and that many
people
 argue that the administration should impose a higher tax on fast
food
. I partially disagree with the viewpoint and in the forthcoming
paragraph
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 I shall discuss reasons.
To begin
 with, eating habit is a choice every individual should have a right to eat according to their preference. The choice of
food
 changes from place to place, some
people
 like to eat cultural
food
 while others choose junk
food
.
For example
, the population who lived in the countryside likes to eat lots of vegetables in their meal, But
people
 who live in the cosmopolitan cities prefer fast
food
.
Moreover
, individuals who are living in the big cities have less time to cook because of their busy work schedule so they are not able to cook their meals. They do not have much choice other than to eat outside.
For instance
, in cities like Newyork where
people
 worked about 8 hours a day after
that
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 they can not cook their meal so they totally depend on packed
food
.
However
, Fat
food
 is not good for individuals health because it contains preservatives to keep
food
 fresh which is not suitable for human health and it costs a lot for an individual. To conclude, higher tax rates can not be a solution for fatty
food
 because lots of
people
 depend on it.
However
, the government should encourage their population to eat healthy
food
 so they can live a healthy lifestyle.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • obesity
  • diabetes
  • heart disease
  • health outcomes
  • healthcare costs
  • consumer behavior
  • socio-economic backgrounds
  • ethical implications
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies
  • regulations
  • nutritional content
  • healthier food options
  • government intervention
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