A museum near your house is looking for people to do part-time voluntary! Unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work in your letter: • Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum • Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • Give details of when you would be available for work

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Dear Sir Recently I have found your vacancy in the local newspaper, so I would like to present myself as a candidate for

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. I have already applied for voluntary

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there. I am interested to

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in the museum because it is a great opportunity to enrich my knowledge about ancient civilization. I have been gathering some information for my gratitude

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for the university. I can highlight, that I am a hardworking man. I have appropriate experience as a teller in front of an audience at university.

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, I guess that my received knowledge at university would be useful and interesting for visitors to your museum. Presently, I have been finishing some business in the other town. I will be back on the 21st of July. I will be ready to take my duties. it would be great to get any decision from you,

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I have left my contact details below under

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text. Regards Paul Newman

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

162 words

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