People succeed because of their hard work; luck has nothing to do with success. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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is associated with hardworking. In some countries,

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are raised up with the belief that struggling can make everything possible and

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can be achieved.

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essay will discuss the positive aspects of

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idea and its possible drawbacks.

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, the

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is one of the crucial factors of accomplishment, so by persuading

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that their

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relies on their own attempt, they would learn responsibility. To put it more simply,

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would not expect other people's help to achieve what they desire.

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, a teenager who needs a car would put his

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her parents under pressure for purchasing it. While if he

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she was taught that having a job could help him

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her buy a vehicle independently, there would no financial burden on the parents' shoulders.

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, that vehicle would be more valuable for him

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her, since it was bought by hard work.

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, the opinion that effort contributes to

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probably results in mental disorders. To illustrate, some events happen in our life, which

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not under our control. These unexpected occurrences may be a hurdle in the

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path.

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, if someone strongly believes that trying hard makes the impossible, possible would get obsessed with working and waste the time. Imagine an athlete,

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, who has

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for an international competition, but gets some injuries before the contest.

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person can not achieve a medal, no matter how hard he

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she has tried.

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may have a detrimental effect on his

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her mental state. To conclude, convincing

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that struggling is an important way of

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, may be beneficial for their future since they become more responsible.

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, there are some downsides,

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as a bad impression on mental health that should be considered.