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You live in a block of flats; your neighbour makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, you should: explain the situation tell him/her how you are effected by this Suggest what you want the landlord to do.

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Dear sir, My name is Zannatul Firdaus, I am a service holder and I live on the 3rd floor of your apartment. Today I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that I have been facing so many problems because of sound created by my
next
-door people. To embark with, my neighbour plays loud music at any time, and sometimes they shout at their children which make a lot of
noise
 pollution.
In addition
, sometimes they move their furniture, as a
,
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result we feel very disturbed.
Moreover
, they close their door so roughly, my family and I are facing really very bad for
this
.
Furthermore
, for
this
noise
 problem my brother and I cannot study well, my younger brother is afraid of failing in the examination. Over and above, we cannot sleep well at night because they play loud music at night. Yesterday, my grandfather had felt headaches as they create
noise
.
However
, I have already told them but they did not stop
this
. Even they do not care about us.
Thus
, I want you to say them to do not to create
noise
.
Otherwise
, I have to leave your apartment which I do not want as you are the very Cooperative landlord I have ever had. I hope you will understand my situation and take some steps. Thank you so much for the time you read my letter. With regards, Zannatul Firdaus
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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