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networks
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advertisment
and the Correct your spelling
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jobs
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people
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platforms
instagram
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facebook
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those advertisement
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jobs
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a community
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however
they get less money in retribution. Add a comma
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certain
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administrations
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consequently
their payment is less than other professions. Add a comma
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strongly believe it is not fair to have Change the capitalization
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,
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apply
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well-educated
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decide
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giant
gigantic
an
increase in Correct your spelling
and
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entertainment
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instead
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choosing
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apply
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before
in
social networks.
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on
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work
government
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gained
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development
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the development
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of
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promoting
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