Advertising has become an unavoidable part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our daily lives while others say it is negative one. Discuss both views and include your opinion.

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there is no doubt that the advertisement sector made a great success in
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rely on
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believe that
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advertising is to be
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useful
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nowadays while other
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will look for both views and give my opinion. on the one hand,it is a good investment for
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to ackownledgethem about the new product that those came in the market.
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a big multinational
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advestise
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advertise
their items on television and poster card on the road to inform the individuals about the items and the
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explain the properties and offer to
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advertisement
advertisements
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who want those type of product to bye but they could not
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find
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they directly order to the
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for
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the product
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or they just go to the market where the
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make the
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capable to purchase easily.but
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think not everyone complacent from the advertisement
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if the less important advertisement showed again and again on television and poster install on the wall of
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home so these type of
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activities
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find disgusting and deplorable.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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