Some people believe that success comes from hard work. Others believe that success has to do with luck. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Give specific details and examples to support your opinion.

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Many people

work

hard, but only a few succeed. We see

this

especially in professions that are always in limelight,

for example

, in sports, movies, music, arts and theatre. So many athletes struggle on the field, but only a few gain glory.

Also

, certain oriental cultures adopt a fatalistic thought process. Based on

this

, few people believe that indeed getting

success

depends on

luck

. But, I strongly disagree with

this

sentiment and firmly believe that

success

depends on hard

work

and perseverance. 'Fortune favours the brave', is a famous adage, which highlights the importance of efforts and determination. Dhirubhai Ambani, Steve Jobs, Narendra Modi are people with humble backgrounds. Yet, they have attained

success

by their efforts. Sure, they have suffered setbacks and problems, but they overcame all challenges with enthusiasm and faith

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and eventually attained

success

in their ventures. Yes ! Sometimes, one does not get the desired results despite giving effort while others effortlessly land a windfall. There is always an element of

luck

involved- the intrepid coach spots and recruits the talented but poor footballer, the talent scout listens to a diva by chance and recruits her, but even here, these individuals were practising for long hours before they were spotted. In conclusion, there is an apparent veneer of

luck

to every

success

story, but the fact remains that every

success

story is laced with hard

work

and passion.

Thus

, fear not and

work

hard for lady

luck

is bound to visit the determined soul and bring

success

with her.

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