Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A majority of governments believes that economic growth is a mandatory target,

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the public

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other improvements are equally important for a nation. I reckon other targets

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as education and agriculture growth are indeed benefits for a country. We will discuss

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on

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topic and exhibit reasons to support my opinion. Despite , a sovereign has been

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based on economic growth globally, though, a nations' uprising really on other categories as well,

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as literacy, agriculture, etc.. these are the core for development, just

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standalone in long run.

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, education - plays a key role in everybody's life. When one society

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privileged to improve their knowledge and another hand, a part of society couldn'

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reach for it which would

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create imbalance.

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, during

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pandemic, many

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know what it is and they didn'

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have enough wisdom to understand the issue. Particularly in India,

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started to do group virtuals to please god for forgiveness that the bad deed human has been doing these many years. The issue could have seen different results

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if the people had basic learning.

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, agriculture - many people follow same

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method for harvesting which gives the outcome of a loss. A strong nation means a country

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can produce its own food and save the remains for future use. India is

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farming land and a majority of

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depends on

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for their survival. Since farmers don'

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have enough knowledge of

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resources, like scientific inventions, supplements, water-saving

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and types of food can be produced from the same time interval, still following oldage methods. Due to the technical stuff, they are unable to succeed

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. Here the government should educate them to utilize all the possibilities. In conclusion, in my opinion other ,sectors improvements are equally important to strengthen a nation. Food and knowledge both are

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basic need of every human,

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should be prioritized.