At the present time, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of the situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, the
population
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of some
countries
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contains a relatively huge number of young
adults
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while some
countries
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have a large number of older
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. Young
adults
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create disadvantages due to several reasons. According to
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I am going to demonstrate my personal thoughts with some examples.
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of all,
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the characteristics
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of the
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of one country determine a lot of things
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as the level of the economy, welfare, education, etc. If one county has a
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of more young
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, it has some advantages. There is a huge amount of labour in
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country. Young workers can handle difficult situations compared to older people which is why employers can easily find employees in their workplaces, and workings continue to have
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troubles
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physical power. Young
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have adaptive skills and can keep pace with technology.
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, increasing the
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of young people is not good for the future of the country and has many disadvantages.
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, finding a job gets difficult for young
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,
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they have to work that they don’t want to do. They may sink into despair about their dreams, and
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may drag their mental balances into a deadlock.
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, the unemployment rate increases criminal activity. They may steal for a living, and officials are hard
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to stop them.
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, young
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in developing
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are forced to leave their homes to migrate to developing
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to survive hardships.When we look at Turkey's 2020 migration diagram, we can clearly see
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. In conclusion, the
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age structure has a place in the level of development. In my opinion, the
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with a large number of young
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has more disadvantages than advantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographic shift
  • disposable income
  • stimulating economic activities
  • volunteer
  • community services
  • public pension systems
  • healthcare services
  • shortage of workers
  • productivity
  • immigration
  • social implications
  • elder care services
  • technological advancement
  • Inter-generational relationships
  • knowledge transfer
  • ageism
  • infrastructure
  • age-friendly
  • public transportation
  • accessibility
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