At the present time, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of the situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, the
population
of some countries
contains a relatively huge number of young adults
while some countries
have a large number of older adults
. Young adults
create disadvantages due to several reasons. According to this
topic
I am going to demonstrate my personal thoughts with some examples.
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First
of all, characteristics
of the Correct article usage
the characteristics
population
of one country determine a lot of things such
as the level of the economy, welfare, education, etc. If one county has a population
of more young adults
, it has some advantages. There is a huge amount of labour in this
country. Young workers can handle difficult situations compared to older people which is why employers can easily find employees in their workplaces, and workings continue to have less
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fewer
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trouble
about
physical power. Young Change preposition
with
adults
have adaptive skills and can keep pace with technology.
However
, increasing the population
of young people is not good for the future of the country and has many disadvantages. For example
, finding a job gets difficult for young adults
, therefore
they have to work that they don’t want to do. They may sink into despair about their dreams, and this
may drag their mental balances into a deadlock. Also
, the unemployment rate increases criminal activity. They may steal for a living, and officials are hard put
to stop them. Add the particle
to put
Besides
, young adults
in developing countries
are forced to leave their homes to migrate to developing countries
to survive hardships.When we look at Turkey's 2020 migration diagram, we can clearly see this
.
In conclusion, the population
age structure has a place in the level of development. In my opinion, the population
with a large number of young adults
has more disadvantages than advantages.Submitted by alkanyilmaz90 on
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