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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are advantages and disadvantages of this?

#year #school #university
Nowadays there is a tendency to have a
year
 break after completing school and starting
to
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university. Taking a
year
 off gives some advantages to young
people
, there are
also
 some drawbacks of it. To commence with, it gives enough
time
 to young
people
 to decide a profession for their
future
 carrier. Sometimes, choosing
future
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 profession looks
such
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 a tough task for young
people
.
Hence
, young
people
 can decide
a
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profession within a short period of
time
 and make a proper decision which avoids regret in the
future
 about their choice.
In addition
to
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, it creates opportunities for children to start their past
time
, hobbies.
In other words
, they can improve themselves in learning new language skills, can be a master in any kind of sports.
Therefore
, having a
year
 off leads the young to discover their skills.
Moreover
, most young children tend to travel all over
world
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 or do any volunteering job.
For instance
, it helps them discover picturesque views of different countries. As consequence, with the help of taking a
year
break
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 the young can gain knowledge about the different cultures and traditions.
Conversely
, one problem is that when the young take a
year
 off, they may waste their
time
. Preciously, without a proper plan having a
year
 off may cause wastage of
time
. Another drawback is which leads children to stop studying, they`ve pushed to spend
time
 with their friends and be
unemployment
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.
For instance
,
this
 drawback can cause the young
fall
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 into bad habits,
such
 as alcohol, drugs. To sum up, while having a
year
 off can bring about some benefits,
but
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it may have drawbacks for the young`s
future
.
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