The Internet has made our lives easier or more difficult. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words

Nowadays,
Internet
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the Internet

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plays a major part around the world for many
businesses
and
share
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information. Some
people
believe that the Internet has become more life easy for many, while others claim that it
make
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us difficult. I strongly agreed with the statement because online has many benefits to
people
and
businesses
for education and for communication purposes.
First
of all, today online education become the biggest advantage
to
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for

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students and workers to learn whatever they want.
Also
today we need to know things to do if anything
not
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does not

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work
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works

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suddenly and
then
can learn
from
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apply

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online and
then
will do it.
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, If a person wants to develop their own website, whether the person with IT experience or not could develop a website using Wix which is
online
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an online

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web builder platform for anyone to create their own website.
Secondly
, these days communication
made
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is made

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easy
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for International
businesses
and
people
who want to connect to other countries. Nowadays, business deals and
meeting
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meetings

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have
done
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been done

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through online platforms
therefore
this
made things easy for
businesses
and they could save some money for travel.
Moreover
, it is very helpful to connect
between
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apply

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people
from different countries without any expenses.
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, Zoom and Zoho meeting
platform
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platforms

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become more helpful for many companies to
held
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their meeting and
also
they can conduct
online
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the online
an online

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business
presentation
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presentations

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. Meanwhile, it
also
helps students to study from home. In conclusion, nowadays online has many advantages and makes things easy for everyone with their online study and
also
communicate between
businesses
and
people
around the world. In my
opinion
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I strongly believe that Internet has made our life easier and have many advantages
to
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all.
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