The Internet has made our lives easier or more difficult. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays,
Internet
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plays a major part around the world for many
businesses
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and
share
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information. Some
people
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believe that the Internet has become more life easy for many, while others claim that it
make
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makes
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us difficult. I strongly agreed with the statement because online has many benefits to
people
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and
businesses
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for education and for communication purposes.
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of all, today online education become the biggest advantage
to
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students and workers to learn whatever they want.
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today we need to know things to do if anything
not
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work
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suddenly and
then
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can learn
from
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apply
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online and
then
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will do it.
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, If a person wants to develop their own website, whether the person with IT experience or not could develop a website using Wix which is
online
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an online
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web builder platform for anyone to create their own website.
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, these days communication
made
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is made
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easy
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it easy
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for International
businesses
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and
people
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who want to connect to other countries. Nowadays, business deals and
meeting
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meetings
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have
done
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been done
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through online platforms
therefore
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this
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made things easy for
businesses
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and they could save some money for travel.
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, it is very helpful to connect
between
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people
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from different countries without any expenses.
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, Zoom and Zoho meeting
platform
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platforms
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become more helpful for many companies to
held
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their meeting and
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they can conduct
online
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the online
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business
presentation
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presentations
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. Meanwhile, it
also
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helps students to study from home. In conclusion, nowadays online has many advantages and makes things easy for everyone with their online study and
also
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communicate between
businesses
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and
people
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around the world. In my
opinion
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I strongly believe that Internet has made our life easier and have many advantages
to
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for
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all.
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