Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and gives your opinion.

The majority part of people supports the idea that environmental
issues
should be addressed on a worldwide scale while the other part of society decides that these types of
problem
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should be solved on a local level. For my beliefs that environmental
issues
should be solved on a global scale. On the one hand, there is a clear argument that the environment is a global vital problem which should be addressed by the majority of
countries
and I absolutely agree with
this
point of view. At the start, one reason can be that global environmental
problems
such
as air and marine pollution, global warming,
deforestation
, ablation and etc. affect both developed and undeveloped
countries
so that these
issues
, which enquire enormous financial funds and effective steps for saving the environment, should be solved with all humanity. Admittedly, a large
number
of
countries
should organize summits and other international conferences, where governments can discuss the
issues
including environmental
problems
and make a decision for keeping the environment
such
as reducing
emissions
or decreasing
deforestation
.
For instance
, almost all
countries
of the world gathered in Glasgow in 2021 for the UN conference (Cop26) for discussing worldwide environmental
issues
.
Consequently
, the success of
this
summit pledges to reduce methane
emissions
by 30% by 2030 and end
deforestation
after 2030.
On the other hand
, some environmental
problems
should be resolved domestically. One of the reasons that some environmental
issues
,
such
as river pollution or
deforestation
of local areas, require effective steps from specific
countries
to which they belong is. To illustrate, in 2021 a large
number
of fires happened in Siberian forests and belonged to the area of the Russian Federation, so the Russian Federation refuse help, which was offered by some developed
countries
. The
second
reason that
this
type of environmental issue enquires more attention and more specific approach from some
countries
such
as the reduces gas
emissions
or the ending pollution of water by industries. To exemplify, gas
emissions
, polluting by industries of some
countries
, should be solved by steps from these
countries
. In conclusion, it seems to me that a large
number
of individuals support the point of view about solving global
problems
by almost
countries
of the world while other scientists and individuals support the idea about solving environmental
issues
by domestic
countries
. My point of view is that vital environmental
issues
should be solved on a global scale by a large
number
of
countries
.
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